tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post5699625640762661212..comments2023-11-03T06:02:02.128-07:00Comments on By Ken Levine: The time I rewrote Neil SimonBy Ken Levinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17305293821975250420noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-45585537146806909912010-03-11T09:37:30.889-08:002010-03-11T09:37:30.889-08:00#1-i have read "neil simon rewrites". it...#1-i have read "neil simon rewrites". it's a terrific read.<br /><br />#2-on a trip to NYC, i'd just walked out the side door of st.patrick's cathedral (just having been at TV museum) and ran right into neil on the sidewalk. normally, i'm always mr. cool blase when spotting someone famous, but because he's not a <i>celebrity</i> in the usual sense, i gave him a huge HI! HOW ARE YOU! and scared the shit out of him. i still feel bad about it.<br /><br />#3-as a young kid, i was a part of a very small town theatre group. we had nothing. no money. no stage, nothing. we staged "barefoot in the park". it was performed on risers in a large room. no curtain! our wonderful director elaine changed the name of the show & advertised it as "six flights up" ....her way of avoiding the royalty/$$ problem. neil lost nothing that night, maybe we had a audience of a parent each.normadesmondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17325110017442011627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-315588439563822022010-03-04T19:57:55.563-08:002010-03-04T19:57:55.563-08:00FWIW: Twitter is good for this: since it lets you ...FWIW: Twitter is good for this: since it lets you write long, and then edit down to 140. :-)Baylinkhttp://tr.im/btonicnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-86798891924965397212010-03-02T18:22:24.094-08:002010-03-02T18:22:24.094-08:00Reminds me of the credit from the 1929 Fairbanks/P...Reminds me of the credit from the 1929 Fairbanks/Pickford "Taming of the Shrew, by William Shakespeare, additional dialogue by Sam Taylor."<br /><br />WV: Unger--need I say more?Chalmersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-38314015744926098012010-03-02T16:27:10.415-08:002010-03-02T16:27:10.415-08:00Dear Ken,
Here's a question not really fit fo...Dear Ken,<br /><br />Here's a question not really fit for the comments section, but I don't know any other way to contact you: Would you ever be willing to entertain the the thought of visiting a small liberal arts college with a lot of students interested in television and film (and radio!), giving a talk and working with students who crave information on writing and directing? You can contact me directly (jnichols@depauw.edu) if you have any (even passing) interest -- or even if you don't. <br />JonathanJonathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09657326965491389493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-1121469389381429452010-03-02T00:51:16.991-08:002010-03-02T00:51:16.991-08:00"Paul Duca said...
Doug, I'm glad you br...<i>"Paul Duca said... <br />Doug, I'm glad you brought something up--there's a bit of news I need you to get to Ms. Morehead. I was talking with a friend of mine who loves in New York, and he informed me that there is a new one-woman show opening up on Broadway in the near future, starring Valerie Harper. She will be portraying the woman who most blatantly copied Ms. Morehead's style and attitude....Tallulah Bankhead.</i><br /><br />I was aware of this, thanks Paul, as she did it at the Pasadena Playhouse first.<br /><br />Pasadena, the new New Haven.D. McEwannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-42984572947049788852010-03-01T16:07:11.398-08:002010-03-01T16:07:11.398-08:00"I bet if he doesn’t sue me, Neil Simon would..."<i>I bet if he doesn’t sue me, Neil Simon would agree."</i><br /><br />Those aren't mutually exclusive.Dr. Leo Marvinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07669626692363827776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-40848698594268362142010-03-01T14:42:08.816-08:002010-03-01T14:42:08.816-08:00even your capcha is going with the general theme o...even your capcha is going with the general theme of this entry and has begun abreviating. :D<br /><br />WV "compi": short for "compilation".ritanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-25452047673905744942010-03-01T09:26:31.968-08:002010-03-01T09:26:31.968-08:00On the other foot: if either "Citizen Kane&qu...On the other foot: if either "Citizen Kane" or "Network"... two films which were 90% speeches... had been edited for Drake-like brevity, actors like Beatrice Straight never would have won the Gold Statuette With The Trademarked Name, and Mr. Bernstein's little story about the young woman he glimpsed briefly at the ferry back in his earlier days, would not be haunting me for the rest of my days (as she haunted his).<br /><br />Sometimes you just gotta let the people <i>talk</i>, you know?Famous!noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-7701423117550820872010-03-01T06:58:00.616-08:002010-03-01T06:58:00.616-08:00SharoneRosen, the late Don Howard of San Diego rad...SharoneRosen, the late Don Howard of San Diego radio fame became a radio sales weasel in the early 80's. <br /><br />His method for getting the copy down to ;60 (after he'd written a :90) was to make the production guy read it really fast...<br /><br />And it was lovely copy with phrases such as "easy credit? If you're breathing, you qualify!"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-50096405751820518132010-03-01T06:10:21.912-08:002010-03-01T06:10:21.912-08:00That makes two of us. In a high school theater cla...That makes two of us. In a high school theater class, a friend and I did a scene from _The Odd Couple_. Same story: time limits, a desire to keep the scene "complete," etc. So I knitted a line or two. Lord knows how good the editing was, because we flubbed the lines anyway.Brian Sianohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17756946585673391111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-12264391650213889762010-03-01T04:59:55.344-08:002010-03-01T04:59:55.344-08:00I love this man guys. He left memories before his ...I love this man guys. He left memories before his time will come. Keep it up.gihhttp://get-infoz.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-17111176869890774152010-03-01T04:50:38.374-08:002010-03-01T04:50:38.374-08:00My friend lives in New York, as well.
WV: "d...My friend lives in New York, as well.<br /><br />WV: "diked"--how I almost feel about making that silly typo previously.Paul Ducanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-26276112483416539882010-03-01T04:38:04.829-08:002010-03-01T04:38:04.829-08:00Doug, I'm glad you brought something up--there...Doug, I'm glad you brought something up--there's a bit of news I need you to get to Ms. Morehead. I was talking with a friend of mine who loves in New York, and he informed me that there is a new one-woman show opening up on Broadway in the near future, starring Valerie Harper. She will be portraying the woman who most blatantly copied Ms. Morehead's style and attitude....Tallulah Bankhead.Paul Ducanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-11249221023236221022010-03-01T03:37:58.426-08:002010-03-01T03:37:58.426-08:00Great.
vw: wogent: Sadly unable to be cogent.Great.<br /><br />vw: wogent: Sadly unable to be cogent.jbryantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-13599970421576868272010-03-01T01:55:37.663-08:002010-03-01T01:55:37.663-08:00Now you tell me.<i>Now</i> you tell me.A. Buck Shortnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-38651878383210292882010-03-01T01:11:19.478-08:002010-03-01T01:11:19.478-08:00The first draft of my second book was 80,000 words...The first draft of my second book was 80,000 words. The published version is 40,000 words.<br /><br />The only thing is, I hate it, and it doesn't say much of what I was trying to say. When I look at it, it is a pale, butchered reflection of what I was trying to write. I haven't spoken to that editor since it came out. A bitter experience.<br /><br /><i>"DAVID BISHOP said... <br />I played Jake in a production of </i>Jake's Women<i> by Neil Simon. Very funny and poignant play, BTW."</i><br /><br />I just saw a production of <i>Jake's Women</i> less than a month ago, and I really disliked it. Now maybe it was just a poor production of it (Certainly much of the cast was - let's say - inadaquate, though a couple of the women were good) but I found the psychology of it way off, the premise muddy, and by act two I disliked Jake so much, I no longer gave a rat's ass if any of his relationships ever worked out or not. I might add that the audience sat and watched it in stoney silence. Only I laughed at a few of the lines. No one else laughed at any of them. But you're right that Jake is an <i>enormous</i> role.<br /><br />A song writer I am working with now once wrote a parody song to a Sondheim number from FOLLIES, which he called "The God I Don't Believe That I Am Here Rewriting Sondheim Blues." He sent it to Sondheim, who found it funny, and ended up taking him under his tutilage. Now my friend has had several musicals he's written produced here and there (One will be staged here in Los Angeles in January), and we're writing a show for London. (With me quaking, knowing Sondheim is seeing my work-in-progress. Yikes!) All because he had the balls to rewrite Sondheim and let him see it.<br /><br />Now if you'll exuse me, I'm going to go show Charles Dickens how to get A TALE OF TWO CITIES down to one city. ("Do you really NEED London?")D. McEwannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-56345326093404536932010-03-01T00:30:04.337-08:002010-03-01T00:30:04.337-08:00Taken from your MASH post and a response you gave:...Taken from your MASH post and a response you gave: Otherwise,I love teachers! <br /><br />I guess this could be a Friday question: What teacher did you "love" the most...someone in grade school? high school? college? or someone in the industry who may have "taught" you some things you would have never learned anywhere else? And what did they do to make you "love" them so much?YEKIMIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01921751875397071034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-69521378435324075922010-03-01T00:15:14.032-08:002010-03-01T00:15:14.032-08:00(cont'd)And often the similarities in tastes a...(cont'd)And often the similarities in tastes and talent don't work for the partnership.itstartedwithawindmillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01033370072650216855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-14042472009788176372010-03-01T00:13:40.237-08:002010-03-01T00:13:40.237-08:00Ken, This is totally off the subject of your post...Ken, This is totally off the subject of your post. You had mentioned your writing partner and obviously you have been successful. As an aspiring screenwriter, your I am extremely interested in your opinion of why your partnership was successful and your opinion of why partners are and are not successful. <br /><br />In the short time I've been writing, I've seen incidents of writing partners bringing the same talents and tastes together.itstartedwithawindmillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01033370072650216855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-63234702517219515302010-02-28T22:35:01.674-08:002010-02-28T22:35:01.674-08:00I had to cut my first novel from 125,000 words to ...I had to cut my first novel from 125,000 words to 75,000 words. It was the greatest learning experience of my writing life.Cap'n Bobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11783977137812876489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-29280983853559642012010-02-28T22:08:50.720-08:002010-02-28T22:08:50.720-08:00Sometimes long speeches can be a relief for the ot...Sometimes long speeches can be a relief for the other actors on stage. I played Jake in a production of Jake's Women by Neil Simon. The character's on stage the whole play, bar one sequence where he leaves for a slash - during which none of the other characters can speak, as they're projections of Jake's psyche. Whoever plays Jake has to learn the entire script, word for word. The only time you get to relax is when one of the woman has a speech that takes most of a page. It's a glorious oasis in the midst of a massive effort of concentration.<br /><br />Very funny and poignant play, BTW.<br /><br />unnoray: Retracting negative instructions to people called Ray.DAVID BISHOPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17342376036664282348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-7818234025188399052010-02-28T22:01:23.260-08:002010-02-28T22:01:23.260-08:00Long speeches are a bitch to write. You’re often i...<i>Long speeches are a bitch to write. You’re often including multiple thoughts. Usually the best way to attack them is let it flow. Just get it all on paper. Don’t go on to sentence two only after sentence one is absolutely perfect. Once you’ve said everything you want to say, even if you’ve said it five times, then go back and trim and eliminate and shape. At some point you will be satisfied that the speech is just where you want it and every word is absolutely necessary.</i><br /><br />Exactly what I'm doing for a book of essays I'm co-writing. The publisher's manuscript deadline is April 1 and I feel a lot less pressured about it because nearly all the essays are written, except one, which I saved for last because it'll be the most fun for me. I like doing this now. The sentences are there, I get to play around with the sentences, re-sculpt some of them, delete what doesn't work, and all fearlessly this time compared to when I first wrote them. In fact, early this morning, I looked at one of them, read the beginning and thought, "Did I really write this crap?" What a difference from two months ago when I wrote it.Rory L. Aronskyhttp://scrapsofliteracy.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-84964742023227412692010-02-28T21:43:43.465-08:002010-02-28T21:43:43.465-08:00I once rewrote Ernest Kinoy, one of the greatest d...I once rewrote Ernest Kinoy, one of the greatest drama writers in TV history. He'd written an episode of a show I was running and, while his words were great, they just didn't sound like our characters. Even so, I felt like I was committing a crime.Lee Goldberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13442268370192897461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-47983986912948245782010-02-28T21:35:08.791-08:002010-02-28T21:35:08.791-08:00I once got to rewrite the Pulitzer Prize-winning j...I once got to rewrite the Pulitzer Prize-winning journalist Harrison Salisbury. Now I always say between us, Salisbury and I won one Pulitzer.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01998867386294693956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19336675.post-58851651756889832232010-02-28T19:55:32.342-08:002010-02-28T19:55:32.342-08:00even true in the shortest of short forms. Back wh...even true in the shortest of short forms. Back when they used to pay me to write radio spots, first I would put all the essential info on the page in as entertaining a form as I could (or was allowed). Then, had to whittle my genius down to :30 seconds... :60 if it was an epic spot. <br /><br />wait, I'm sure I can tighten this up...SharoneRosenhttp://www.sharonerosen.com/people.htmlnoreply@blogger.com